I only have one real comment: there damn well better be a sequel! Or more than one!
Jane, I hate to say this, but in some ways it feels like that was Act 1. I can see how it tied up many of the plotlines, and developed the character of Malachi - but there are some very major loose ends here.
And besides, I want to know more about Malachi. And David. And the Moebius theorem. And WTF happens in Malachi's head. And ....
I finished it last night and l gotta say I loved it! ;D ;D ;D
But I agree with Tazettae, I want a sequel ASAP. The Moebius plot and the characters are so good I'm left wanting more of it :D
I want to see what becomes of Augustus, what will happen with Malachi and David, and Gretchen and Dexter... You get the picture. This was a great appetizer / opening for a series and well worth the kickstarter support, because I think it will be a great game series someday. I'm really happy I had a small part in helping it get started :)
Keep up the good work and please, continue the story !
Careful ladies. If you wear "bright, passionate colors" you are clearly sexually frustrated. Rector sez so.
Depends on the context.. on a dimly lit library devoid of people.. ya I agree with him ;)
Not to mention that if you wear purple clothes and orange lipstick, you're looking for a blonde.
Oh wait. Sorry. If you fail to fawn all over Malachi, you're looking for a blonde. Ahem.