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A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons

Started by writerlove, May 02, 2013, 03:22:49 PM

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writerlove

Ever wonder what happens to restless spirits? What happened to them? Is there something in their existence that made therm that way? Four Winds explores one such story. In part 1, you'll meet a young woman doing everything in her power to protect her son. http://www.postudios.com/fourwinds/?p=1666
"Love can't be banished, even from this place. ... still less can it be banished from my heart."
"ENOUGH! Burden me not with thy poetry."-KQ6

GrahamRocks!

Oh my God...

*horrified and saddened*

Wel, at least Alexander helped them.

Numbers

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RapeAsDrama

I like what this page has to say about rape being used in fan fiction.
I have no mouth, and I must scream.

writerlove

I made some edits because a few of the subjects are a little too dark for the established King's Quest universe. It's still a good story, though.
"Love can't be banished, even from this place. ... still less can it be banished from my heart."
"ENOUGH! Burden me not with thy poetry."-KQ6

GrahamRocks!


Numbers

THERE you go. It's okay to make King's Quest stories that are mature, but it's hard to make them mature without also making them jarring. I wasn't trying to be rude, but I definitely found the original story jarring. This draft is a step in the right direction, though.
I have no mouth, and I must scream.