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A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« on: May 02, 2013, 03:22:49 PM »
Ever wonder what happens to restless spirits? What happened to them? Is there something in their existence that made therm that way? Four Winds explores one such story. In part 1, you'll meet a young woman doing everything in her power to protect her son. http://www.postudios.com/fourwinds/?p=1666
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Re: A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2013, 01:30:40 PM »
Oh my God...

*horrified and saddened*

Wel, at least Alexander helped them.

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Re: A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2013, 03:27:38 PM »
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RapeAsDrama

I like what this page has to say about rape being used in fan fiction.
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Re: A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« Reply #3 on: May 04, 2013, 04:48:36 PM »
I made some edits because a few of the subjects are a little too dark for the established King's Quest universe. It's still a good story, though.
"Love can't be banished, even from this place. ... still less can it be banished from my heart."
"ENOUGH! Burden me not with thy poetry."-KQ6

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Re: A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« Reply #4 on: May 04, 2013, 05:02:54 PM »
Going to go read it now.

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Re: A Troubled Spirit Faces Demons
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2013, 06:00:39 PM »
THERE you go. It's okay to make King's Quest stories that are mature, but it's hard to make them mature without also making them jarring. I wasn't trying to be rude, but I definitely found the original story jarring. This draft is a step in the right direction, though.
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