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Offline Fierce Deity

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Finally, beat it.
« on: November 12, 2011, 01:52:22 AM »
Not bad. I liked everything up to:

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Good overall. Here's to hoping Episode 5 wraps it all up nicely, preferably with a cute bow on top.
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Re: Finally, beat it.
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2011, 10:31:16 PM »
Early sources say the entire royal family commits suicide after despairing over their lives of endless painful psychological traumas.

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Re: Finally, beat it.
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2011, 10:35:01 PM »
Early sources say the entire royal family commits suicide after despairing over their lives of endless painful psychological traumas.

They have magic genies that can transport them across the world but they don't have a cure for manic depression? Hmm, what a sad world they must live in.  :P
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