Four Winds: The Weeping Willow

[GavinGreene]

Four Winds contributor Betsy Kirkwood gives us the origin of one of Daventry's most famous trees, the Weeping Willow!

http://www.postudios.com/fourwinds/?p=773

[DawsonJ]

I like this story so far (I've yet to read the second half, as I'm not feeling up to it).  It needs a handful of changes (run-on sentences and common wording errors, mainly), but it's creative, and includes a nice twist. Good job!

While I'm thinking of it, I'll say this:

"Taken back" is better written as "taken aback."

...she saw Herbert laying in the sand.

Laying is the wrong verb; try Lying.

[snabbott]

I'm confused. Wasn't this story published a while ago?

[drusain]

I really like that artwork of the witch casting the spell on Herbert.

[GrahamRocks!]

I'm confused. Wasn't this story published a while ago?

It was. But, they've reposted a redone version with better wording and grammar.