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Started by awesomeasapossum, September 20, 2005, 06:59:25 PM

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   Rosella didn't know what to do. Next to her was a clone of herself in every way. She was on Alexander's right. She had to think of some way to clue Alexander that she was the REAL Rosella. But how? HOW?! Then she thought of something. Something brilliant. Something that her father, mother, and brother would be proud of. Something that would prove that she had her father's "adventuring blood" inside her. Of course she already knew she had her father's "adventuring blood inside her.
   Her plan involved something Alexander had said moments before the other her appeared. The quote still echoed in her mind:
Quote from: Alexander"The knife...Rosella! Manannan is watching us at this very moment. He wants me to kill you."
Looking to the ground she spied what she was looking for. When Alex had been knocked backward by the elderly man he had dropped the knife. She reached down pretending to adjust her flowing silver garments. She quickly picked up the knife and thrust it into her chest.

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awesomeasapossum

Is anyone looking at this? Cuz if no one is then maybe I should just stop it. But at least someone has to be still reading it.....right?



RIGHT??!!

I hope so....
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Deloria

I'm looking!! :P It's okay to post more now :P
 
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Manannan couldn't believe what he was seeing. The REAL Rosella was picking up a  knife. She was going to do the job herself. But should he do the same to throw Alexander off? He wasn't sure. He figured that he should just be safe. Just in case Rosella was really just trying to catch Alex's attention. But what if she was just adjusting her garments? He decided to try to read her mind. Concentrating very hard, he probed through her early memories.

Rosella acted when it looked like Manannan was concentrating on something else. She quickly stabbed Mannan with the knife. Just once. That should do the trick.

Suddenly Manannan realized what Rosella had done. Even though he still had his magical powers he for the most part WAS Rosella. And because of what he'd said earlier about evil ruling Daventry if Rosella wasn't killed.

Alexander was amazed. One of the Rosellas had stabbed the other and now the one that had been stabbed was writhing on the ground, acrid smoke billowing out of her nostrils. She suddenly changed to Manannan. His body shook as if it were in an earthquake and red and yellow light flowed out of his hands. Then a black, menacing,  ghost-like object seeped out of his chest and evaporated. The knife floated out of him and landed on the ground softly, while his skin became wrinkled and older. His hair fell out, and when it hit the ground it burst into flames. Finally, he slowly deflated, and then turned to a pool of dark-blue liquid. The liquid suddenly turned to steam and then he was gone. Manannan of Llewdor had been defeated.
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Rosedragon

Hey, I like your story. Very good. I am glad Manannan has been defeated, he is so evil.  I like happy endings. I hope all turns out well for the royal family.


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Deloria

I agree. Nicely done.
 
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Thanks but it ain't over yet. It's got 2 parts!


Four days later at Castle Daventry....

"Thank you Alex. Rosella. You have truly helped save Daventry," King Graham said. "I am so proud of BOTH of you," Valanice put in. Just then a bird, Sing-Sing to be exact, fluttered through one of the windows. It landed softly in front of the magic mirror, breathing laboriously, its eyes darting about the room. Alexander knelt down and spoke to it, "Sing-Sing! Sing-Sing are you all right?!" The whole family had surrounded the poor creature by now, and were quietly wiping tears from their eyes. Alexander took the parchment attached to its feet and quickly unrolled it. He quickly scanned over it and then dropped it, shocked. Rosella bent down and read through the quickly scrawled message.

           Dear Alex,
            I can only pray that this note reaches you safely.            Something terrible has happened. A dark magic has surrounded the castle. It won't let anyone in or out. It rains and thunders all day and the sky is choked with darkness. You must come quickly so that you may defeat him. I'm not sure if you've met him before but his name is
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Deloria

NOoooooooooooooooooo! Sing-Sing can't be dead! (:P)

Nice work, though.  ;D
 
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Don't worry I'd never kill off Sing-Sing....Or WOULD I?  :sneaky:
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Don't you dare!I love that bird :P
 
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Alexander shuddered. "Who would do such a thing?! And poor Sing-Sing..." "There is much evil in this world Alex. You and your sister may have defeated one of the most evil people in the world but there arte still others," Graham stated. "Go, Alex. And Rosella, too. Find out what created this and stop it." "We will Father," Rosella and Alexander said in unison. They approached the the magic mirror...

The Land of the Green Isles 2 hours later...
Alexander stood on a very familliar beach. His sister, Rosella was standing next to him. Rain pelted the pair relentlessly. They silently walked up the path to the castle. What they saw amazed them. The castle was not surrounded in darkness as Cassima's letter had suggested. In fact, even though it was raining it was still sunny and warm. The rain slowly ceased and Cassima raced out of the castle towards them. "Alex! Alex!" She cried, "I'm so happy to see you! I don't know why but Mannanan has disappeared, and so has the evil that once choked our fair land!" Alexander and Rosella were even more amazed. "Mannanan was behind this?!" Alexander asked. "Of course!" Cassima exclaimed, "Didn't you read the rest of my letter?"
"There was more?" Alexander asked. Just then Sing-Sing flew up to greet them. The small bird clutched a letter. It was from Graham and Valanice. Alexander read it aloud.
"Dear Alex and Rosella,
On the back of the letter sent to you by Cassima it said that Mannanan was the one behind it. I'm sure that what you did to save Daventry effected the Green Isles also. How silly of us to not look on the back! I guess we were all too worried with Sing-Sing. Your mother and I will be coming to visit you all soon!
Love,
Graham and Valanice"

The End


Tell me what you think of the ending.

Whoa! I just copied and pasted the whole story into Microsoft Word, changed the font to Times New Roman, 12 pt. and then I made the paragraph spacing to 1.5 and the story is 7 pages long!
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Rosedragon

Kind of a surprise ending, but I guess you wanted to keep it short. I thought maybe it could be Alhazared behind the trouble in the Land of the Green Isles. Glad everything turned out ok. And is Sing-Sing alright? She's such a sweet little bird.


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awesomeasapossum

Yep, Sing-Sing's fine.
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awesomeasapossum

I might just disregard the other ending and keep it as an alternate ending. I was just so caught up in the fun of writing a fan-fic that I didn't know what I got myself into. XD  ::) Realizing my mistake, I just finished it quickly.
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