Guardian Angel 2 preview poem

[dark-daventry]

Here it is... A preview for Guardian Angel 2. It's in a poem form, but it is basically the overall story. It's up to you to decipher what it means....

The curse was cast
Eternities past

When the guardians
turn to stone
And the sky torn asunder
An ancient evil
Shallst awaken

The legends must wake
To save our land from
Evil once more
Only then can the world
Be saved from eternal darkness

But beware the evil within
The darkness in humanity
Shall prevail if hope is lost
And if the legends give up

The power of true love
Is the only cure
For the curse

The gates to the realm above
Shall be locked to all deemed
Unworthy of angelic descent
Only when White awakens
Can we all be saved
From eternal darkness


What do you all think?

[dark-daventry]

Since nobody seems to be replying, I will take the liberty of doing so. I really like this poem a lot. It was well written. I am proud of it. Now I just have to start on the other poems....

[Petra Rocks]

*cough* Okay, I can take a hint. 

I actually know nothing about poetry or Guardian Angel 2, so I can't give a very educated opinion though. I can say it is better than my rather disaterous forays into the poetry making trade though. 

[dark-daventry]

You are not supposed to know anything on guardian angel... I wrote it, and the sequel is still a mystery, even to myself... The first one is still my primary focus, which will be getting a complete facelift when I get the chance... In other words, I'm completely re-writing it. From scratch, probably... 93 pages... Gone with the wind...

[awesomeasapossum]

Nice poem!

[dark-daventry]

Thanks! I like it a lot! I am working on more for the future.... I could almost blurt it out... But I will not...