TSL - Cease and Desist
Started by Rick_Florez, September 26, 2010, 11:52:34 AM
Quote from: kindofdoon on September 26, 2010, 12:33:50 PM"Guards! Guards! Someone's trying t-...Well fine, I'll stop if you do."I'm probably missing the humor here, but nonetheless, this line feels out of place every time I hear it.
Quote from: kindofdoon on September 26, 2010, 12:44:15 PMI have a feeling it's something sexual, but I have no idea what it could be... Or that could be completely wrong.
Quote from: Rick_Florez on September 26, 2010, 11:52:34 AMAs you've probably seen in a few other of my recent posts we welcome player feedback because it allows us to improve future episode of The Silver Lining.Some people have complained that certain parts of the dialogs made them cringe or simply wrote it off as bad writing. Unfortunately that type of feedback is very vague so I'd like to ask for specific examples of things that you had an issue with. Though sometimes its more a matter of personal taste we may actually agree with some of your comments and if so can maybe improve upon it in the future.
Quote from: Cat1 on August 23, 2010, 04:09:26 PMFor instance in the description of the vases, a whole sentence is taken to say, "These vases are fine antiquities indeed." Maybe it's because I've spent practically the whole year trying to cut words out of a research report, but to me that sentence is crying out to be edited to: "These fine antique vases... (and then carry on with the description)". In that way you get rid of the useless words "are" and "indeed".
Quote from: crayauchtin on September 26, 2010, 12:49:47 PMShe says it when you click the hand on people.... I assumed it meant I shouldn't be trying to manhandle or feel up on everybody. Even though I get it, it's still not my favorite line of narration.
Quote from: Haids1987 on September 26, 2010, 11:42:26 PMQuote from: crayauchtin on September 26, 2010, 12:49:47 PMShe says it when you click the hand on people.... I assumed it meant I shouldn't be trying to manhandle or feel up on everybody. Even though I get it, it's still not my favorite line of narration.LOL, I am soooooooooo glad I'm not the only one who thought that! That line bothers me, too. That's the only one I can think of right of the bat, let me just replay Episde 1 and get to Episode 2 and we'll see what other opinions I have.